Yue – Freelectronicmusic

Ancora una volta, la nostra voglia di creare e condividere idee nella produzione di testi e musiche si realizza con un esempio concreto:
l’ottimo feddi ha di recente dato il suo contributo alla stesura di un nuovo testo intitolato “who”, eccovelo:

Came from the dust
Through the undiscovered water
Like an eternal breeze
Seize only one man alone

Is the feeling
of that you’re not
Is the thought
of who you wanna be

Fleeting images
Sheets of paper
Child happiness
Confetti treaded on

Everything you see
reveal an emotion
Everything you see
hide an emotion

endless spaces
swimming in my mind
a blind search of myself
I have to choose

can a man feel himself
alone in the world?
can a man feel himself
stranger in his trousers?

..ovviamente non sono riuscito a resistere alla tentazione di metterci mano e stravolgerlo “un pochino” 🙂
ecco la mia rielaborazione:

From far, trough my deep deep abiss
my voice camed fury and hungry, shaped as a black crystal bliss.
..I was drawed and tied by ropes, eating snowfliakes and waiting,
and naked, like a hole on my white eyes, saying:

“nameless now I find the child I was.
All my words from the past burned now on my wax,
all my old yellow draws singing/whispering in my ears.
Can’t run anymore, no, I have to chose,
and I didn’t for years.”

Everything’s always revealed
but everything’s hidden indeed,
you hold my pencil a step far from me,
when I write my eyes through the dots
of this great system I see

so you steel my little hopes with your wet reptile tongue.
And I can’t be what you mean: everything’s finished, everything’s done!
So I turn in thin cinder the endless space where I was swimming.
But you start spinning angry, furious and desperately, crying:

“nameless now I find the child I was.
All my words from the past burned now on my wax,
all my old yellow draws singing/whispering in my ears.
Can’t run anymore, no, I have to chose,
and I didn’t for years.”

“nameless now I find the child I was.
All my words from the past burned now on my wax,
all my old yellow draws singing/whispering in my ears..
Can’t run anymore, no, I have to chose,
and I didn’t for years.”

Per questo testo non abbiamo ancora deciso e/o elaborato eventuali ritmiche, melodie, sviluppi sul come adattarlo/modificarlo ma ..who knows?